E-book factors

I really wouldn't change any thing about my article when it comes to going public, but in matters of improving it with pictures and such, I would do many things. I would add in some excerpts from my mythological story from sixth grade right before the last paragraph. Another thing I would do is I would probably add in a couple bold and colorful letters in the title to make it more attractive even before reading the title. I'm not sure past that, I'll think of some more though, I'm sure of it.