Sunday, January 12, 2014

Madison's Prompt


Divergent: The choosing ceremony

They called my name, my mind still swirling from Abnegation to Dauntless, and even more Amity, I had absolutely no idea. Abnegation was the selfless and kind factor, but I wanted to have fun and I also wanted to do things I could never do in Abnegation. Dauntless was fun, and exciting, and I am brave, but I would never fit into their brutal lifestyle. Amity is peaceful and kind, they only love and never hate, but I also want to be brave and selfless sometimes.
There I was, the knife was inches away, and my blood belonged somewhere, whether I knew where it belonged to or not. I looked to my right and left, then to my parents off in the distance, how I would love to talk to them for a fraction of a second. I also recognized how everybody was here for my life decision, for whatever factor I would be stuck in for the rest of my life, and my life depended on this moment.
I picked up the knife, and looked at the blade that got sharper every second. I only felt a little bit of pain as I became closer to my life sentence. You may not believe this, but I stood there in front of everybody and did eenie-minie-moe between the three bowls and just like that, I was going to the factor Amity. Everybody was shocked and so was I, but sometimes you just have to let fate fall in the hands of chance.


The Absolutely True Diary of a Part Time Indian, by
1/10- 2 hours and 15 minutes, 159 pages
1/11- 1 hour and 30 minutes, 71 pages
Total- 3 hours and 45 minutes, 230 pages

2 comments:

  1. Wow. You should write another series based on her in Amity rather than Dauntless and see where that would take the series. Just a thought. BUt that would seriously be very interesting. And the play-by-play is very detailed without focusing on the unimportant.

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  2. Bailey, I really like the way that you actually changed the decision of the main character. And -ugh- it may kill me to say this, but I agree with John. It would be really interesting to read the rest of the series based off of your decision.

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