The snapping of lowly tree branches as you swiftly move through them,
their texture allowing you to gain footing as you meander along your way.
Walking, and only if you could, look up the mountain
you could see the sun shining with it's infinite rays.
Then, climbing can you see the land underneath your feet,
where auburn, amber, and crimson colors spread with variety among the heat.
Reading Times
2/11- pages 324-339, 10 minutes
2/12- pages 339-353, 10 minutes
2/13- pages 353-399, 40 minutes
2/15- pages 399-472, 1 hour and 20 minutes
Total- 148 pages, 2 hours and 20 minutes
This was a really nature like poem. I really did like/notice all the adjectives you used. I don't really understand how the title "Moving" goes with the poem, but it was a good poem.
ReplyDeleteThis poem has really interesting connections to the outdoors. I like how used a wordly wise word into this. I think this poem painted a amazing image in the readers mind. great vivid details
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ReplyDeleteI liked the natural aspects of you poem and the reference to hiking without uttering the word. It's a beautifully piece and is leaves much room for imagination as well as depicting a detailed outline for that imagination.
Bailey, I enjoyed your poem. Remember to include what techniques you used and to meet the minimum of 15 lines.
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